Originally Posted by gainerama
Derek still wrote an entertaining piece of work, despite the grammar. I can't wait for his next article on Sunday.
Which is exactly the point I was trying to make, I guess I could HAVE written it as succinctly as you did.
Wet Coast Hockey League
Keeper - Pts. Only
Dobber Hockey Pro - Wales
G/A/+-/PPP/SOG/HITS - W/GAA/SV
Trial and Error
Final position 8th
Future objective Champion
Frustration level On hold till next season
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