I don't think it's close to enough. The two top players coming back are on the downside of their careers, Ovi has the best shot at 100-point seasons, Ovi is great at the other categories (hits, shots, etc.) And Ovi has better linemates. And you want the other guy to give up a first round pick in back-to-back years.
If I were the other guy, I'd counter by asking for Rinne, back-to-back first rounders, and something else. He needs to upgrade his goaltending and defence, so he should start there.
If he decides to trade Ovi, he could probably get more in return for him than what you've offered.
12-team Keeper pool, straight points for forwards & dmen. Goalies get: 2 points per win, 3 per shutout, 1 point per assist & 1 point per shootout loss.
Top 8 forwards, 5 dmen and 2 goalies count.
We keep 8 forwards, 5 dmen, 2 goalies & 1 rookie.
Forwards: Malkin, Stamkos, Getzlaf, Hall, Kunitz, St. Louis, Kadri, Gaborik, Hartnell, Brunner, Weiss, Bouchard, McDonald, Connolly
Defence: Letang, Enstrom, Schultz, Markov, Keith, Carle
Goalies: Price, Niemi, Brodeur
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